Art courtesy of Jason Pym
Visions swim in colourful blurs,
I have a fish bowl on my head.
Flailing, the sandy bottom stirs
I have a fish bowl on my head.
In murky water a song slurs
About glassless days. But instead
Visions swim in colourful blurs.
I have a fish bowl on my head.
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So I tried a triolet today which has a form of ABaAabAB – a bit tricky but doable once you’ve picked good themes with versatile rhymes. The image of a fish bowl on one’s head was imprinted in my head by Foster the People’s music video of the catchy “Call It What You Want” at a minute in. It’s very random, abstract, and just visually entertaining, so have a peek if you have time:
Thanks for reading,
thebookybunhead
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One of your best, I thought.
Thank you.
Love this one…and as much as I liked the imagery in the video, your fishbowl is much more fun to think about.
Aww, thank you! I think it’s the fish that make mine more interesting, haha.
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Really cool poem!
Thanks!
Really liked this. Thank you for the like!
🙂
Just delicious ^_^
Thanks 🙂